February 2012
35 posts
Added comma
change spelling from “Lowman” to “Loman”
added pathetic
rearranged break in sentence
reworded phrase
changed “Takes place” to “opens”
Added an introduction to who stated the quote and fixed the quote.
change semicolon to a period
added “high” before “school”
added coma
introduced quote differently
removed “[to Biff]”
reworded sentence for clarification
change “morality” to...
Everyone has his or her strengths and weaknesses as a writer. The strongest aspect of my writing is my ability to construct strong thesis statements and topic sentences. In constructing a thesis or topic sentence, I try to get my points across in a clear and readable fashion. On the other hand, I struggle with my ability to analyze and support my points. Though I have a good point to make, I...
January 2012
34 posts
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By definition a tragic hero is a great or virtuous character in a dramatic tragedy that is destined for downfall, suffering or defeat. Some critics argue that the protagonist in Arthur Miller’s Death of a Salesman, the washed out Willy Lowman, is a tragic hero. Willy Lowman, who’s dream was to be a successful salesman, is destined for downfall, suffering, and defeat, but he is never a...
